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OPEN WINDOWS

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December 29, 2008
When I first read OPEN WINDOWS by ~hyperbolating, I took away so much from it and just could not stop reading it. There was so much beauty in its lines - with each new stanza being more lovely than its predecessor.
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evergreen sifts through open windows,
clear-aired and heady with the promise of mountains;
mixed with the slow drawl of clouds and carwheels
and light hitting the dashboard.

and in this wood-grain scene of tree-tipped timber,
my fingers tap the measured breaths of my parents.


there’s string and air stretched taught over every precipice—
they vibrate with the mass of mountains.

each breath breathes—one, two—
the unpredictability of emotion and movement.


and I am good at words and water,
stumble with brushes and bills—
my tongue loosed is fast and fire,
evades capture by a meandering mind.

mouths mouth “stay afloat,”
but often my arms fall fast to flailing.

but belly-up in sun, everything is
incandescent, iridescent—caught and carried in water—
a river of raindrops not yet forced into stagnancy.
new hampshire makes me prolific.
© 2007 - 2024 hyperbolating
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